Sharing my Shenko fics. :)

[Meesh]

Hi there, fellow femSheps! I'm actually a latecomer to the Mass Effect universe - only played the game in the past month or so. However, both it and Shenko very quickly grabbed my attention. I've even written two fics already - a good sign I am very hooked! I'm sharing these with you folks in the hopes of feedback. Both are ME2-focused, with lots of references to ME1 conversations.

I don't know if I'll be writing any more (for some reason I'm very adamant about staying within how my game was played - no 'future stuff'), but if I do, I'd love some constructive feedback. I'm always looking to evolve further as a writer! :)

 

• Horizon Revisited - I actually liked the raw dialogue during Horizon, I just feel it wasn't adequately voice acted for what was going on. So...I rewrote the tones and way Shepard and Kaidan talk to each other. Also added in their thought processes to further help the original dialogue along.
• Protect Him - this is a one shot that turned into a two-parter. The first part is a conversation between Miranda and Jacob (I'm a fan of those two hooking up... >_>) about Shepard after Horizon. The second is her thoughts before she goes through the relay.